This is by far my favorite submission from you. The floor grid must have been a bitch. Awesome!
Good first attempt.
It's a good attempt at flash games, there's a slight glitch at the beginning you might want to fix though.
Awesome game! The constant replenishing of stock got a bit annoying by the end and a few instances of people walking through walls but otherwise original and well made game!
I liked the game even though the jump controls were a bit laggy and the music repetitive, still a little more explanation to the story would have helped.
I imagined someone working on fixing something and it fits brilliantly. Your melodies are definitely getting more complex which is really good. I have to say the drops of tension at 0:40 and 1:50 are a little cliche but otherwise its brilliant.
Thanks for the feedback. d:
I know the progression isn't the most original thing ever but I really felt it clicked for what I wanted to do with the track. I'll try and work around the cliches in other tracks though.
Dear God Almighty.
It's really good, the only real complain I have is that the beginning is a little too ambient, leaving a little gap for a more focused main voice but it changes nicely, not sticking to one theme and I like it!
I was shooting for a little bit of a progressive and floaty intro. Might change it when I finish the track that comes before it though; see how things flow.
Appreciate the feedback!
Some of the subtler parts could have used more emphasis in the main riff and I would have personally preferred an upbeat quickfire solo when the distortion stopped but its definitely a good composition.
Awesome, thanks for you feedback :3
Like the message. It could have been encorporated into a playground better though.
Yeah, I wasn't very good at using skp when I did this
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